在中考中,写作占20分,分值所占比例大,而写作考察学生的英文综合运用能力,因此非常关键。
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中考英语写作技巧讲解
一、考点分析
在中考中,写作占20分,分值所占比例大,而写作考察学生的英文综合运用能力,因此非常关键。
【中考英语作文的评分标准】
比较为学生所熟悉的就是8+8+4结构,即:
(一)内容:
7-8分:内容切题,意思连贯,表达清楚、完整。
5-6分:内容基本切题,意思大致连贯,表达基本清楚、但不够完整。
2-4分:内容不够切题,意思不够连贯,表达不够清楚、有些离题。
0-1分:文不对题,表达不清。
(二)语言:
①词数:每少5个字扣0.5分,以此类推。只写出个别单词、词不成句不给分。
②拼写:每错扣0.5分,同一错误不重复计数。
③语法:同②
④标点符号、大小写:每两处错误扣0.5分,但扣分总和不超过1分。
(三)组织结构:
①内容充实、上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无语法错误;词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给3-4分。
②内容充实、不写废话;上下文连贯、用语规范、表达准确、无或少见语法错误;词汇和句型句式运用恰当,多见好句型和习惯表达用语者,可给2分。
③一般情况下,内容和语言累计得分在15分以上者(含),方可得到1-2分组织结构分。
④内容和语言在15分以下者,如文中有值得肯定的好句型和表达,可酌情考虑给1分组织结构分。
⑤通篇句型、句式单一、词汇贫乏者,即使无语法错误,一般也不予给组织结构分。
【中考作文题特色分析】
1. 写作话题贴合初中学生的学习生活
2. 写作话题能够引起初中学生的情感共鸣
3. 写作话题要求初中学生关注生活,发挥想象力
4. 写作话题鼓励初中学生对事物发表自己的见解
【高分作文的必备元素】
1. 书写工整,书面整洁,很少有涂改痕迹。
2.要点齐全。要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了避免遗漏要点,可以将题目中给出的要点标注出来。
3.开头言简意赅,不啰嗦,不偏题,迅速引入主题。
4. 句与句之间,有恰当的连接词,使之自然成一体。段与段之间,自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
5.使用丰富的单词,短语和句型。尽可能使用多种表达方式。比如中考作文,主题是帮助他人。同一个意思帮助,假如你就用一个动词help,岂不显得词汇贫乏?如果能在作文中不断地变换方式,用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达帮助同一个意思,岂不更好? 可适当使用陈述句,疑问句,祈使句及感叹句。
6. 能够恰当使用谚语、格言、名言等给文章添彩。
【中考英语作文范文示例】
I want to inventa time machine
As a student(who is experiencingunprecedentedmodern life nowadays), Iwould ratherlearn about the history and the future life of human being from a real experiencethanlearn from a textbook.That’s why(if I can work as a great inventor, inventing a time machine will be my first choice).Themost importantusage ofmy time machine will be visiting one of best schools in Tang Dynasty.As we all know, Tang Dynasty is famous for itsopen-mindededucation. Therefore, when I visit the school of the ancient city, I cannot onlytry different ways of studyingbut (also)communicate with people from different countriesas well.Using a time machineis the mostvividway to learn history as it isbotha record of mankind and a mirror of past, I amlooking forward tothe day when my time machinecomes out.
精彩亮点分析:
亮点一:定语从句修饰对学生现在的生活
亮点二:用would rather … than … 表达学生的意愿
亮点三:用if条件状语从句表达主题
亮点四:be famous for 因…而著名
亮点五:not only … but … as well 不但…而且…
亮点六:用动名词词组做主语
亮点七:用习语both a record of mankind and a mirror of past突出历史的重要性
亮点八:定语从句、表语从句等丰富的句型 表达学生的期待
二、专题详解
虽然说写作不应该拘泥于模板,但有一定的模板还是非常重要,这可以帮助考生在行文结构上有一个很好的把握。
中考英语作文万能模板1:解决方法题型
要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径
1. 问题现状
2. 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
模板:
In recent days, we have to face a problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明A的现状). Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状)
Confronted with(面临着)A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with(应对) the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决方法一). For another -------------(解决方法二). Finally, --------------(解决方法三).
Personally, I believe that -------------(我的解决方法). Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because --------------(带来的好处).
中考英语作文万能模板2:说明利弊题型
这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)
1. 说明事物现状
2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)
3. 你对现状(或前景)的看法
模板:
Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First ---------(A的优点之一). Besides ------------(A的优点之二).
But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ----------------(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse,------------------(A的第二个缺点).
Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to ---------------(我的看法).
(From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, ---------------(对前景的预测).)
中考英语作文万能模板3:议论文的框架
(1) 不同观点列举型( 选择型 )
There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place, ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place, ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____.
People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand, ___原因一_______. On the other hand, ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______.
As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________.
(2)利弊型的议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____.
Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides", __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, ___缺点一______. In addition, ____缺点二______.
To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.
中考英语作文万能模板4:图表作文的框架
As isshown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table(graph/picture/pie/chart), ___作文题目的议题_____ has been on rise/ decrease (goes up / increases / drops / decreases), significantly / dramatically /steadily rising/decreasing from______ in _______ to ______ in _____. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that ________.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________. On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is responsible for _______. Maybe there are some other reasons to show ________. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
中考英语作文万能模板5:现象说明文
Recently _______,what amazes us most is______________,it is true that__________.
There are many reasonsexplaining__________________________.The main reason is____________________.
what ismore_________________________.thirdly__________________________.As a result_______________.
Considering all there,________________________.For onething_____________________,for another________.
In Conclusion____________________.
其他模板
一、英语书信的常见写作模板
开头部分:
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分:
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
二、口头通知常见写作模板
呼语及开场白部分:
Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.
正文部分:
All the teachers and students are required to attend it.
Please take your notebooks and make notes.
Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups.
Please come on time and don’t be late.
结束语部分:
Please come and join in it.
Everybody is welcome to attend it.
I hope you’ll have a nice time here.
That’s all. Thank you.
三、议论文模板
1.正反观点式议论文模板
导入:
第1段:Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... (导入话题)
Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)
正文:
第2段:Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)
Here are the reasons. First... Second... Finally...(列出2~3个赞成的理由)
第3段:However, the others are strongly against it. (反方观点)
Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What’s more... In addition...(列出2~3个反对的理由)
结论:
第4段:Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more harm than good, so I support it.(个人观点)
2.A或者B类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, argue that B is much better. Personally, I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages.
正文:
第2段:There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that ... Another reason is that...(赞同A的原因)
第3段: Of course, B also has advantages to some extent... (列出1~2个B的优势)
结论:
第4段: But if all these factors are considered, A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that ...(得出结论)
3.观点论述类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题
As a student, I am strongly in favour of the decision. (亮明自己的观点是赞成还是反对)
The reasons for this may be listed as follows. (过渡句,承上启下)
正文:
第2段:First of all... Secondly... Besides...(列出2~3个赞成或反对的理由)
结论:
第3段:In conclusion, I believe that... (照应第1段,构成"总—分—总"结构)
4."How to"类议论文模板:
导入:
第1段:提出一种现象或某种困难作为议论的话题
正文:
第2段:Many ways can help to solve this serious problem, but the following may be most effective. First of all... Another way to solve the problem is ... Finally...(列出2~3个解决此类问题的办法)
结论:
第3段:These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to...(强调解决此类问题的根本方法)
四、图表作文写作模板
The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题. The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点 . This means that as (进一步说明).
We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一 . After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化, the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) . The figures also tell us that图表细节二 . In the column, we can see that accounts for (进一步描述).
Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (结论). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因). / It is high time that we (发出倡议).
中考英语写作注意点
一、审题审题就是要认真阅读题目要求,仔细分析、反复思考、推敲题目的含义和要求。
1、审题干(英文和中文),找到关键词和限定词
2、审体裁/文体
3、审时态
4、审人称
二、学会提问,搭建作文框架
示例1:I want to say to myself _____________
1) What would you like to say to yourself?
2) Why do you want to say these words to yourself?
3) What do these words or sentences means to you?
示例2:I’m looking forward to ______________
1) What are you looking forward to ?
2) Why are you looking forward to it?
3) How are you going to realize your goal?
三、确定每个层次的详略分布
四、写好主题句和结尾句
写好主题句的三个要点:
1)必须是一个完整的句子。
2)主题句由主题词和主题思想的表述两部分构成。
3)主题句不能过于笼统或宽泛(general or broad),也不能太具体或狭窄(specific or narrow)。
结尾句三个方面的作用:
1)表示一个段落的结束。
2)对段落要点加以总结。
3)对主题加以评论,给读者留下深刻的印象。
五、用好过渡连接词
1、启: first of all,_________________________________________________
2、承:secondly,__________________________________________________
3、转:however,___________________________________________________
4、合:finally,____________________________________________________
六、善于利用checklist
参考答案
写作练习1范文:
The thing that made me angry
There are few things in life more annoying than being laughed at. When I failed to solve the question on the blackboard and just stood in front of it without saying a word, I could hear those annoying whispers. This really made a perfectionist like me get angry. But I couldn’t let the anger get me out of control. Instead, I chose to ignore those ironic words and focus on the question. In addition, I decided to work harder after school to get myself improved. Due to all the changes I made, I believe I can avoid being laughed at in the future.
写作练习2范文:
Habits
Good habits are foundations on our way to success, while bad ones get in the way and hold us back. To begin with, good habits help us work more efficiently. If we get into the habit of tidying up our rooms, we will find it easy to obtain the things we need. Moreover, good habits leave others positive impressions. Showing our warm smiles is a habit which enables us to get along with our classmates and teachers well. On the other hand, bad habits can be destructive. Lots of people develop lung cancer just because of their habits of smoking. As you can see, habits really make a difference in our lives.
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